ความคิดเห็น
1.ช่วยได้ค่ะ แต่ต้องเรียนรู้กันอีกหน่อยเพื่อให้คุณณภาพงานเขียนน่าอ่านมากยิ่งขึ้น ลูกเล่นต่างๆก็คล้ายกับพวก word จึงทำให้ใช้ง่ายได้ง่ายพอสมควร หรือไม่ก็ควรอธิบายเพิ่มเติม
2.ขึ้นตอนทุกขั้นตอนนั้นเป็นสิ่งสำคัญที่ขาดไม่ได้ ถ้าไม่มีขั้นตอนทั้ง 5 ขั้นตอนนี้ งานเขียนของเราอาจไม่สมบูรณ์ ซี่งเราต้องทำทุกขั้นตอนให้งานเขียนออกมาได้ดียิ่งขึ้น
3.แก้ไขงานยากนิดหน่อย แก้แล้วพอบันทึกมันก็กลับมาเป็นเหมือนเดิม
4.อ.น่าจะมีเวลาสอนมากกว่านี้

ขอบคุณค่ะ

Volkswagen Aqua

Innovative automotive developments for the car, and then go one step further, not only the driver is alone on the road. But also in the driving surface. Do not let even the water !!

          Chinese designer of Volkswagen. Designed super cars of the future "Volkswagen Aqua" This car is capable of running all types of terrain and soil, sand, water and ice, the car has features that are similar to the hover craft or amphibious craft. (“Volkswagen Aqua” นวัตกรรมรถยนต์ ล้ำอนาคต, 2559) also improves the speed of 62 miles per hour. It also acts as a fourth fan blades to drive. The car has been designed with extra-large. This gives the driver good visibility even more. Visible surround

           Volkswagen Aqua are also hydrogen-powered motor that is supported in the region by car. This is powered by hydrogen, carbon emissions are at 0%, which means reducing global warming as well. While motorized modular framework. In the first act in a motor vehicle control could rise. Another part of the motor system that controls the steering wheel to move along different paths.
Volkswagen Aqua is super cars of the future to watch. The property is in need of people who like to travel. And is also environmentally friendly as well. I think this car will be sold at a price of about 1.8 billion baht in 2018, this book will open.

References
“Volkswagen Aqua” นวัตกรรมรถยนต์ ล้ำอนาคต(2559).“Volkswagen Aqua” นวัตกรรมรถยนต์ ล้ำอนาคต.Retrieved fromHttp://www.thairath.co.th/content/228924

 Volkswagen Aqua 

Is an innovative automotive developments for the car and then go one step further. Not only that, but the driver was alone on the road. But also in all driving surfaces. Do not leave even the water !!

          Chinese designer of Volkswagen. Designed super cars of the future, "Volkswagen Aqua ". This car is capable of running all types of terrain and soil, sand, water and ice, the car has features that are similar to the amphibious craft or hover craft(ไทยรัฐออนไลน์,2559). It also speeds. up to 62 miles per hour in total. There were also four fan rotor blade acts as a force to drive the car. While the car was designed with extra-large. This gives the driver good visibility even more. Visible surround

           The Volkswagen Aqua are also hydrogen-powered motor that is backed up in the area by car. By using this hydrogen energy Carbon emissions are at 0%, which means reducing global warming very well. While the system is modular motor to run clear. The motor of the first acts to control a vehicle that can float up. Another part of the motor system that controls the steering to move along different paths.I believe that the vehicle must be watchful absolutely.

What is the name of this car?         

-Volkswagen Aqua.

 What does it look like? (Shape)      

-Oval shaped with four rotors.

 What kind of fuel does it use?      

-Hydrogen.

  How many kilometers per hour?      

-A top speed of 62 mph.

  How much does it cost? (Price)       

-No Information

  Other information (such as) What does it can do?           

-Can run on all types of terrain and ground water, sand and ice, the car has features that are similar to the hover craft or amphibious vehicles.

 What is your In-text Citation?     

-Can run on all types of terrain and ground water, sand and ice, the car has features that are similar to the hover craft or amphibious vehicles (ไทยรัฐออนไลน์,2559).

 What is your Reference list?       

-ไทยรัฐออนไลน์(2559).“Volkswagen Aqua” นวัตกรรมรถยนต์ ล้ำอนาคต.Retrieved from Http://www.thairath.co.th/content/228924

Usain Bolt

"Usain Bolt" is a Jamaican sprinter nicknamed "The Blitz" (The Lightning Bolt), he is the world record holder. In the 100 meter race time was 9.58 seconds and the 200 meters sprint world record time of 19.19 seconds was also a running speed of up to 44.2 km / h. He has a great body of his legs is longer than the runners, but will generally about 15% lighter than about 12%, making it possible to chop the legs move faster and farther than the legs. He has a height of 6 feet 5 inches (195 centimeters) could run in the 100 meters with the pace at 41 paces (approximately 2.4 m / pace) while runners others have run about 44 steps, he can win the gold medal. 100 meter run of two consecutive Olympics. In the Olympic year 2012 he was able to record the same time, 9.63 seconds, which broke the original self-made in 2008 with a time of 9.69 seconds in 2009, he competed in the World Championships in Berlin, Germany, hosted the event. this is a declaration about his experience. Also swept up three gold medals at the same Olympics is running 100 meter, running the 200 meters men's relay 4 X 100 meters, but also broke the world record in the race, running 100 meter with a time of 9.58 seconds and the race ran 200 meters with male. time, 19.19 seconds, well When looking at the success after entering the field of athletics career. He achieved 11 gold medals and two world records at the age of just 25 years and is considered to be highly successful for anyone who still has no equivalent. In the short term, of course.

Usain Bolt

Usain Bolt is a Jamaican sprinter is owned by the nickname "The Blitz" (the lightning).He is tall and dark,he has a round face and short black hair.Bolt improved upon his first 100 m world record of 9.69 with 9.58 seconds in 2009 – the biggest improvement since the start of electronic timing. He has twice broken the 200 metres world record, setting 19.30 in 2008 and 19.19 in 2009. He has helped Jamaica to three 4 × 100 metres relay world records, with the current record being 36.84 seconds set in 2012. Bolt's most successful event is the 200 m, with three Olympic and four World titles. The 2008 Olympics was his international debut over 100 m; he had earlier won numerous 200 m medals (including 2007 World Championship silver) and holds the world under-20 and world under-18 records for the event.He grabbed Men's 100m Olympic gold medal in 2016, 7 Olympic gold medals -, 11 gold medals at the athletics world championships two silver medals, one silver medal at the world championships relay, Central American and Caribbean Athletics Championships first game.I like him because I like the rush it gives me motivation to run again .

  - What is his/her name?
Usain Bolt.  

- What does he/she look like?
He has a great body of his legs is longer than the runners.

- What kind of sports does he play?

A runner Jamaican native nicknamed "The Blitz" (The Lightning Bolt), he is the world record holder.

-What has been his sport success?

He won the gold medal of men's 100m race two consecutive Olympics. In the Olympic year 2012 he was able to record the same time, 9.63 seconds, which broke the original self-made.  

  - Why do you like him?

I like him because I like the rush it gives me motivation to run again .